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..at sixes and sevens.. by ~DeeplyInThought:iconDeeplyInThought:



At sixes and sevens,
Torn at the soul.
Decisions to be made,
My life takes a toll.
Cut in half,
Right down the middle,
Clawed by what I left behind,
Those scars won't heal.

Love makes the choices,
No longer in control,
Filthy lies...mistrusted feelings,
No simple way out.
Wearing away,
Piece by piece,
Under a shroud of doubt.

Suffering the pain of a broken tale,
Like a healing wound ripped open,
Lost again,
In the midst of it all,
Lead me through,
I'm afraid to fall.
I've fallen so much,
Near to giving up,
Torn,
Right down the middle,
But I keep moving on.

At sixes and sevens,
And my scars won't heal.
©2009-2010 ~DeeplyInThought
:icondeeplyinthought:

Author's Comments

forgive me, haven't written in a while...^^;
uh...2 or 3 situations thrown in a blender...
hi everyone! :wave:

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:iconfurrylemmings:
Nice poem!

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"When in doubt - Be root"
:icondeeplyinthought:
thank you :)

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...may angels lead you in...
:iconiniquitire:
:) heyyyy
need i say the comment? :D
yeah i should- its awesome.
:icondeeplyinthought:
thanks chai :]

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...may angels lead you in...
:icondarkredcrystal:
man i konw that i have said this alot but each time it is like you give me more of a reason to say it and mean it...you are awesome...never doubt that k!

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hyperness.inc
:icondarkredcrystal:
hmmm you are getting more and more interesting...hmmm interesting.....hmmmm

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hyperness.inc
:icondeeplyinthought:
am i?

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...may angels lead you in...
:icondeeplyinthought:
*doubt*doubt*doubt*doubt*doubt*doubt*doubt*doubt*doubt*doubt*doubt*

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...may angels lead you in...
:icondarkredcrystal:
yup you are! havent i told you this before?

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hyperness.inc

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